All Comments on 'Smart'

Well written, great build-up and refreshing to see an Arab guy being the hero!

I hope you will write more!

Please write more!!

Such a lovely buildup, climax and ending. So hot, thank you <3

I didn't quite like the slutty treatment he had towards her, or the way she responded without even resisting, but this is just matter of taste. However I am thoroughly impressed by your choice of words, images and figurative language. You sure know how to use a pen and you have a unique style! Oh! By the way. Very clever story