All Comments on 'Smile for the Camera Ch. 01'

This was very well done. A nice take on a oft done subject. I liked the way Arlene was depicted. I also like the way the story has room for future 'developments'.

Nice set up. I like the way this is developing. Please write more.

Just Excellant - We have experienced pretty much the same experience. For an older wife, my wife (Lou) received some very flatering comments. We are looking forward to more of your story (experiences?)

Really a great sexy story, Makes me want to take some pictures of the Misses and upload....

Nice slow buildup. I am looking forward to future installments.

I enjoyed your original, sensual, and intimate story!

In addition to the qualities which I have already mentioned, you demonstrate your talent for story telling by the way you build up the tension in the story, even as we know the general direction it is going.

My musical association is: "Bolero" by Ravel. The theme in "Bolero" repeats itself, yet - it continuously intensifies by volume, pace and variety of instruments as the music unfolds. Thank you.

Who gives a fuck.

HA

he smoked a meaty cock, got buggered by a fat one, betrayed!

A superb concept. Jamax is an excellent story teller! Continue please!!!!

Silly story about stupid people.

You are all over the place.

eg: over her head as I stood up and then we both pulled their shorts down