All Comments on 'Smoothing the Way'

I do hope that there are further parts to this story. It is so well written and hyper erotic. Fabulous!

One of the best I’ve ever read.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Hope there is a part two to this.

Oh my god can't wait for more

I'd love to be the wicked stepmother

Love Sherri

That was an excellent story! So well-paced, kept simple, and fantastic use of dialogue. Kudos!

This ranks right up there with the best in this category. It also screams for a follow on chapter. Or two. Great job.

I love a good story with daddies!

i can't wait for chapter two

Perfection. Looking for MORE

I wish I had the words to express how incredibly HOT this story is. I use the present tense in the hope that there will be so much more!

Too often I read comments to stories here that say “Keep going!” when the story has obviously reached the best possible conclusion.

Not so here.

Seriously - this was simply one of the most imaginative and erotic stories I’ve read here in this category filled with obvious tropes.

You’ve transcended that.

You’ve lit a fire in Allie. Keep it burning.

Absolutely top-shelf, aged in oak barrels, organic, non-GMO story. Hotter than the heat from a supernova. I can't be completely satisfied until he fucks all of her holes. Please... proceed.

The category you’re reading, Anonymous, is Incest/Taboo. I could explain it to you, but I can’t understand it for you. What a fucking moron. Needs to ask mommy fit mire milk and cookies then STFU as he shoves the cookies in. Little biotch

Now the real input of MY opinion. Hot 🔥🔥 story and ip there with the series “Thank Heaven for Little Girls.” Dude. If thus old fart could give you a 19, I would. So, a Follow, Bookmark and Fav story

So good.

So, so good.

This may be the only incest story I’ve ever given 5. Brilliant writing, combined with a tension and sense of anticipation as you take your reader on a highly erotic exploration of a relationship which can only progress. Thanks

You have an incredible talent for storytelling. This isn't my favourite genre of story, but the quality of your prose and the emotions you convey makes this one of my favourite stories to read.

It's an incredibly hot tale. Kudos.

I often wonder if you are a professional writer outside of this site as you certainly have the talent.

Definitely worth 5 stars. This story is dripping with temptation and expectation. It did not fail to deliver and was a super read with a believable possibility about it. Plenty more like this please

Well written and a hot story. Hope to see her friend join the couple.

Only a loving parent can gently reveal to the one with lurking pinings.

This novel made me go to room of my own daughter and back wit her panties on my cock!

Loved it, I hope there's more

Chapter 2 please! this is great!

I don't often give a 5, but this one rated it. Well Done.

Despite the fact that this story does not appeal to any particular kink of mine, I thoroughly enjoyed the writing. Your command of the language, especially your handling of dialogue, is unusually good for this site. Thanks for a fun time!

Fucking Awesome!

This story reminded me of what my Aunt did to me.

Next chapter please

Very sexy but a little bit manipulative I thought. 4/5

Fantastic, in every way. Your writing is superb, your characters are realistic, and the build-up is tantalizing. Please, write a Chapter Two, and more.

Needs at least 1 sequel please

Very good!! Very well written!!! Made me horny and uncomfortable at the same time, which I suppose was the intent...

Oh my, the dialogue between the two women, one encouraging, the other wanting but needing that little push to follow through. That was so erotic to read it needs, no must have a part 2

Late to the reviews, but I agree with others. MORE, please!

Great !!!! good writing especially Heather talking Allison into it.

that was hot with the mom confessing fucking her father while she she had her daughter fuck her father

I admire your skill, but not the subject matter. However, as a psychotherapist I recognise that we do have erotic feelings towards our parents even though they are normally strongly suppressed. You only have to look at the list of most popular stories and incest is right up there, with mother-son being the top category. It is the actual activity that does the damage.

You bastard

En Fuego!

How delitefully degenerate...conniving young twisted wife..

.presumably daughter on BC....

That was fucking amazing

A perfect story, terrific suspense, fantastic imagery, anticipation of what’s the come. Fantastic.