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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Confusing to say the least. The action and names kept switching and at times did not make sense? I did like the short story and it was entertaining. Proof reading to ensure it does not mention the wrong person should be done. Keep writing you are good.

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I have always loved making stories and I love fucking. I must say I get a lot of emails and comments regarding the timeline of my stories. But I must say, there really isn’t one. Once you get past Motherly Love, then there is the There Goes the Neighborhood neighborhood seri...