- Incest/Taboo
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Click hereIt was a camera. An expensive one, too, with high-definition video capture to boot. I laughed out loud. She was brilliant.
- COMMENTS
OminousGoldover 2 years agoI enjoyed it 4 Stars I have to agree with some of the other commenters that a little more detail would have been nice . Also a little slower pace and I'm not looking for a 12-page story ,I mean it would be nice to get a little more build up , maybe a little bit from her side more because we never really learned anything about how/ why she's wanted it for so long and other than she's watched him jerk off so but very good enjoyed it
Anonymousabout 3 years agoGood premise.
But the sex acts are much too rushed. MUCH more detail is needed. Slow progression is needed. JUst saying cock went into pussy and they fucked for a few minutes -- with no more details than that -- simply isn't very erotic.
Four stars -- for potential.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoGood story. Good dialog.
Gave it 5 stars. But I'd have liked it even better if she'd teased him with her breasts -- extensively -- before he got his hands on them.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThat teaser about her feet, I was waiting for him to explore more.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWoW what A amazing story & attention to all the realistic details , very believable unlike most . Great job & enjoyable to read.
Purduemyronover 4 years agoI felt the build-up was fantastic. The unrecognized reciprocal attraction ultimately bursting through made this story excellent. Looking forward to more
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou should have made her a virgin also. You still could and expand on the story.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI wish I could have given this story 10 stars. It had me on the edge (on my chair??) the entire time. Very well done. Thank you!
Anonymousover 4 years agoThere is nothing in this story that explains why Michelle broke the barrier of sibling taboo with her younger brother.
From the description of her she should normally be expected to find other and older mates to play with.
