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Click hereIt was a camera. An expensive one, too, with high-definition video capture to boot. I laughed out loud. She was brilliant.
I enjoyed it 4 Stars I have to agree with some of the other commenters that a little more detail would have been nice . Also a little slower pace and I'm not looking for a 12-page story ,I mean it would be nice to get a little more build up , maybe a little bit from her side more because we never really learned anything about how/ why she's wanted it for so long and other than she's watched him jerk off so but very good enjoyed it
Good premise.
But the sex acts are much too rushed. MUCH more detail is needed. Slow progression is needed. JUst saying cock went into pussy and they fucked for a few minutes -- with no more details than that -- simply isn't very erotic.
Four stars -- for potential.
Good story. Good dialog.
Gave it 5 stars. But I'd have liked it even better if she'd teased him with her breasts -- extensively -- before he got his hands on them.
That teaser about her feet, I was waiting for him to explore more.
WoW what A amazing story & attention to all the realistic details , very believable unlike most . Great job & enjoyable to read.