All Comments on 'Snatch Competition'

I was finding this story a lot of fun until you suddenly switched into BDSM after which, for me anyway, it went rapidly downhill. There's no doubt the tale was well-written, it's just that my personal taste runs to a gentler form of love. And given the way the story developed, perhaps it might have been better placed in the BDSM category.

So Hot and Nasty and Devious and Delicious.

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I enjoyed the story telling, and the characters are both interesting. The one thing that bugged me was how the first part of the story showed only rivalry, and not a shred of attraction, even in their thoughts. That made it hard for me to connect with the way they seemed to physically, sexually connect. The sex scenes were also well written, though a little too bdsm, considering how intense they got.

Anyway, 5 stars and all. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.