All Comments on 'Sneakers at the Supermarket'

Thank you for submitting your story! It was nicely paced and I appreciate the build-up you placed between your characters. I gotta admit, a sexual attraction towards sneakers? Not an easy thing to make sexy, and by the end of the story, I still did not have any attraction at all to them. However, I could still enjoy how you conveyed your erotica and how it still had a stable plot throughout. Keep up the good work! :)