All Comments on 'Sneakers on a Wire Ch. 00: Prologue'

Sounds like a confession?

Here is my gripe... I like it. What little there was. But...

Much too short. If this is going to be a novel or novellas who wants to read it a paragraph or two at a time stretched over days or weeks. By time the reader gets into the chapter it ends abruptly. You lose me that way.

I would rather spend my time reading a well written story of ten chapters, than a well written story a few paragraphs at a time.