All Comments on 'Sneaky One Night Stand'

by Vic5

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Juvenile writing style on an unrealistic story. No normal person would have unprotected sex with a random stranger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well, an okay start

The idea is okay, but the story sounded like it was written by a 10 year old. The sentences were very choppy. And then there's the name switch in the middle... Keep working to improve your writing skills.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Who is Jeanne?

At the beginning the wife was given the name "Jeanne"... All of he sudden she become Mary...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good

the best part of your stories are at the end because there over.Your arotten story teller and should be a reader not a writer.

gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
Its a good story

Hubby didn't know what was going on and they have shared before, so this could be a little bit more relistic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
C'mon Vic . . .

Couldn't you have tried to make this just the TEENIEST bit plausible?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
name confusion

is her name Jeanne or Mary?

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