All Comments on 'Snorkeling Adventure Ch. 03'

That was a wonderful third chapter to this story. It was so descriptive (not just during the erotic parts, but also during the actual snorkeling scenes) that I felt like I was in the water with them. More please....I do not think that Emma and Nate are ready to leave their paradise yet.

Nice HG, I read the first one long ago but didn't realize it until I re-read it today. Very enjoyable!

I said it for chapter 1 and I cannot see ANY reason to change my comment for chapter 2 or this effort.

Love your work!!!!!!!!!

The conclusion to this story proves that descriptive erotica can work in a romantic setting- if the author has the talent. The author of this story, Hikergirl, definitely has that, and the result is a superior adventure/romantic adventure. Snorkeling Adventure is not an Erotic Couplings story, it is a Romance story, and a very good one. Five stars.