All Comments on 'Snowboards & Hot Tubs Ch. 01'

Wow...what an amazing story!!!

Definitely worth a long follow-up!

Great storyline, character building and tension. When can we expext the next chapter??

Waiting with baited breath for the next installment... great storyline, great sexual tension. Loved it!

keep stories like this coming. great!

Many cuts above even a good story. The multiple perspectives, believability, jumps in time, and interest in the characters' motivation really set this apart. Really well written!

You are a great writer, and you really know how to set up a steamy situation! Instantly one of my favs on Lit!

love it

Spin The Bottle in a hot tub. Brilliant. The whole game worked great; I loved how it seamlessly built from what was essentially a goofy sitcom situation into a really hot sex scene.

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Good story but no warning between jumping from Chris to Taryn’s point of view.

Definitely a bonding journey, good friends becoming more. I definitely look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.