All Comments on 'Snowed in at Christmas Pt. 02'

FANTASTIC!!!! I HOPE YOU ARE BUSY WRITING AND THAT THERE WILL BE MORE TO THIS LOVE STORY COMING SOON. GOOD LUCK AND THANKS MERRY CHRISTMAS YOU LUCKY DEVIL,

rushed it to fast......almost like you did not want to write anymore of the story so you just jumped to the end.

Dad's already fucking the daughter

Beautiful story I hope you continue Danielle and Bryan's story. It was so erotic

Dad and daughter is the next chapter!

It's a well-written story. I like how you pace it, and how you handle the relationship. I look forward to reading more.

The one criticism I would offer is to decide what perspective you are telling the story from (first person or third person) and maintain that. If you do switch perspectives, separate them in some way and acknowledge the shift.

Excellent story. I hope another time is soon. There definitely more to this story. Especially with the father and daughter. 5 stars

Lovely story. One I hope that you continue.

don't get how calling her by her name is supposed to be sexy. The dad and daughter would be too predictable

Great story. I hope you continue the story.

Great story and a very sexy romantic tale, you can feel the love and lust. Finding out of how much further their relationship goes would be a beautiful sequel. You have a real gift that excites me and makes me fantasize about being in that situation. Thank you for the great writing and stimulation it's much appreciated, please keep up the great work 👍😊

Was mother an son staying the cabin intell new years day's plus did the mother get pregnant with son baby?

I'm really liking this story and looking forward to more of it.

definitely needs a chapter 3

You get 4 Stars for this...the writing turned really iffy at many points...shifting tenses, bad grammar...sentence structure.

Your story premise is great...but ruined the reading with the whole unorganized/thought out structure of it.

Still, mom and son got to know each other quite well...father sounds like a real Butt-Head...

5 Stars from me and yes their were grammar errors but the story was so hot it reall.y did not distract from the story. Y.ou really need to work on chapter 3 as their has to be much more to the story. Mother son love is so very special.

EXCELLENT...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

So what happened next

And then........................................?