by satyrsbard
Needs a sequel to wrap up the story and perhaps add in some turmoil... A "will they be together forever?" type of slant while also jettisoning and destroying the first wife.
By page two i knew it was a shitstorm and it was getting a one. Score.. why bother reading more?
This was a great story.
You had set it up as a great BTB, would have liked to see the soon to be EX! get it up that ass.