All Comments on 'Snuggle Ch. 03'

Well edited, well thought out. Managed to do a "flashback" without it feeling overly contrived or forced.

All you have to do now is stick the landing.

Couple of pieces of advice, don't feel like you have to fill it with sex, and dont drag it out longer than it needs to be. Im sure you probably already have a feel for the ending, look for the most direct path there and write, the fluff will fill itself in.

Looking forward to the rest of the series.

A Wiseman

Very well told, I do hope this has some conclusion and is not left hanging!

I'm very impressed with this excellent tale.

asianToy