All Comments on 'So Close'

Father-Daughter fucking at its very best! Maybe he made another daughter in his daughter?

Keep it up..the subtle reference to other emotions was a very good.

Very hot, raw, all-consumming. Well done.

was it was intense eroticism at it's best. I'm still not quite able to complete thought...great job.

Great start on your writting career. A very well thought out hot and erotic story, grabbing you from the start and holding you until the finish.

Damn so hot, that was pure raw fucking. I think every girl has a need to be taken that way some just dont admit it, but i know I was sa very turned on.

I want a dady to do that to me lol

Looking forward to more.

Angela Hart

It shows what plenty of fathers ache to do to their little princess. The draw of that adorable little coochie between her legs overwhelms their minds. For lots of dads, even thinking about their daughter's sweet slit has their fatherly cock practically busting out of their pants. And I like don's suggestion--time for daddy to make a baby in his baby.

She called him by his name... is is maybe a step-daughter, daughter he told to call him by name, to spur him on, or roll play with the wife?

This was really good and intense! Even thou it was only 1 page,it definatlely took a hold on me...Great job!