All Comments on 'So Here I Am Ch. 01'

Beautifully written. So very erotic. I was fortunate enough to enjoy such a relationship in my mid- fifties, and I still think of Kevin and Sharon often. I hope there is more to your story.

I like how you describe the characters. Body shapes in the real world.

You left some of the best parts out!

With the magical click of a mouse the Baladeer is back! Since this is Ch. 01, JP’s adventures must just be starting. Hope the husband was well-fucked too since that was on the date night three-way wishlist. The “Vulcan greeting” made me laugh out loud, but what a sexy scene. So well written. Five Stars and looking forward to more, sir.

***Thanks for the read.

Can't wait for a Ch. 2!

Very well written. Not being 'Bi', I did not miss that part, and I appreciate that loss. Not remembering you ever introducing yourself to them, Her calling you "Daddy", I guess I will call you 'Our hero', and assume OH will start fucking her, seriously, in the next chapter. This is where Tommy might start getting left out of the play-time. We all like your style so hope you are writing the next chapters now. Keep writing.

XYZ

Thanks for the comments! I appreciate, and will incorporate much of the suggestions in upcoming chapters.

More please

WOW! Just like Tommy and Beth, this story is HOT AS FUCK also. Nice story line, great sex scene, and very well written, what more do you need. Thanks, MLF