All Comments on 'So Much for Quiet Time'

ur writing as allways is very good thx

Thank you. I appreciate your comment.

My only quibble is that a woman who didn't orgasm with her husband suddenly does from anal sex? Not being a woman, I won't say it isn't possible, but it just seems that the machinery isn't exactly wired that way. I also appreciated conversations with the daughters - a very nice touch!

Not good writing. Ever heard of a quotation mark for speech? First half page you're telling us what was said but not one quotation mark in sight. No score since I didn't finish.

Reminds me of my cabin during storms.

The story was chock full of Quotation marks.

"There are no quotation marks!" Anonymous said

"Oh yes there are," I replied.

"" = quotation marks.

Instead of describing what people are saying, have them say it. Ie quotation apostrophes.

Good story, the end was kind of rushed as it should have continued a little more. Well done 5+++stars