All Comments on 'So Much Trouble'

Gripped already, I can't wait to read more. And... 'His eyebrows tried to climb off his face.' I love this line!

Way too many gibberish names. Could not find the plot through the noise to get interested.

Love this world from the first moment I read The Last Dominant.

Can't wait for more!

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For the new submission. Waiting for more. Any word on the follow up for Emperor for the Eclipse?

For the story. Looking forward to more submissions. Any word on follow up to Emperor for the Eclipse?

Maybe it'll turn around in the next chapters?

I did struggle with the first half, there's so many details present that I assume relate to the overall universe you have built but I simply could not keep track. However, when we got to the Wish the story became far more focused on these three and character driven. That was well written and engaging, and that's what has me moving onto chapter two :)

I can't wait for more. I adore this world--I just finished reading THE LAST DOMINANT and would love more in this world.