All Comments on 'So Pretty...'

Its always hard to find something erotic and not creepy in this category. this story, however, was very erotic and not at all creepy. I loved the dialogue ("Good girl" has always been a turn on for me") and the description. It was concise and to the point, not drawn out and overblown. And the sentence "Such an old friend this feeling was" is a very good and unique description. I did think her name was a little strange, though it occurred to me that you may have written this about a specific person. Keep writing!

I really like this so far but it feels unfinished. please continue!

just wow... i mean this is just beautifuly done... i loved it! so much better than the other more common stuff, it still had that force, dominance, and fear but i just loved how... romantic it seemed, like getting surprise sex from a secret admirer! LOL this is deffinately an all time fave!!!!

I usually like more, err, well reluctance (not quite the right word but whatevs) but this story has a sweet side to it I haven't wanted from other stories, nicely done!

Lovely

Short and sweet. Hot descriptions.