All Comments on 'Soccer-Mom Unit Ch. 01'

by Robotman1974

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Weird Creature adventure!

A creature from another world manages to marry a Widower who has two children. Scary scenario that only gets worse. Interesting! Enjoyable Write!

EffectEffectover 17 years ago
Pretty good but weird

It's rare that you get a story that can come off good but just plain weird at the same time. At least that's how I feel about this and I'm really interested in seeing how this plays out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
the fembot

Why hasnt the boyfriend thought about attaching a tracing on the fembot pam ?then he would know where she is why didnt someone tell brad what pam was when the met is everyone a robot or does the robots just taking there places they should have made a fembot in the appearence of brads late wife.

Pat

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