All Comments on 'Soccer or Succor Ch. 01'

It was great. The way you told the story and how everything flowed was very good. I look forward to chapter two and wonder who will be next.

The stories on this site are getting worse daily. Yours is no exception.

...I'd played soccer at school!

Why doesn't she make a daddy out of one or two of these players?

If Mr Bullshit does not like what he is reading here he should go away and not return.... I love your writing and I have you book marked so that I can keep coming back to see if you have writen anthing new???? I'm in the process of reading everything you have posted.

Bob