All Comments on 'Soccer Practice Pt. 01'

Short but sexy.

Thank you for reading! I really appreciate the comment.

Great story! I would have liked a bit longer but for first story it was awesome! Looking forward to more from you!

It ended a bit quickly. But there is always a second chapter maybe. Great first story. Really enjoyed it.

I agree with you both that it ended very quickly. Honestly I wrote this as a rough draft but was too tired to go back for a few more passes. I'll work on that in the next installment!

Well done! I’m looking forward to that next installment. Thank you.

Thank you @gjames17 !

Still waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for the first one.