All Comments on 'Soccer Team Promise'

A clever initial premise and a fun plot (with no surprising twists, though). As usual, the writer's sex scenes are many, well written, and presented with a light touch. After plowing through some recent "Loving Wives" stories filled with anger, misogyny, and a strident insistence on female chastity, I very much enjoyed the relaxed, pro-sex attitude of this story.

I couldn't help thinking that--since a bathroom was nearby--the girls would have wanted to take at least a very quick shower before the big orgy at the end.

All in all, this is a sexy and very enjoyable read.

Five stars.

Please do a second part, very good

Imagine every team in the Women’s World Cup using this strategy.