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by coloradosouthernboy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
i want more...

im disappointed that it didn't end with them having sex. i want to hear more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad!

Sounds pretty good so far,hope you post the rest of the story soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WOW!!!!!

please post more. well written and really hot.

toJohnny7toJohnny7over 17 years ago
Hottest thing that ever happened to him!

This is pretty hot and I can understand why the extra taboo might be so exciting. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fun Story!

Would love to read more of your adventures...true stories are the best! Nice job with the writing too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More

You have to continue and tell all. It is great so far.

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading! But......

This one could have been much more erotic. Somehow in reading it I felt that not all thepossible story was told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very hot.

I liked your story very much, it hits especially close to home for me.

The only thing I might have suggested is that you attempt to provide more detail for the reader so the mental imagery is made clearer, stronger. But overall, I enjoyed reading it and I hope to have the opportunity to read more.

Happy

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
We want to hear more!

Tell us more of your adventures! :)

hornygrannyhornygrannyover 17 years ago
HOT!!!

Having been an only child I can only imagine how hot it would have been to catch my brother jerking off. I hope you write much more about them.

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
So hot colorado

I live in Atlanta myself coloradosouthernboy,

since 78 so i hope to read more of your incredible and well written stories

Pat.

Orion623Orion623over 17 years ago
Teriffic

Loved the dialogue and the humor throughout the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Haven't read the whole thing yet but...

I can tell it's going to be very funny. I love funny so I'm going to rate this now and hope I agree with myself later.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it

I hate stories that the writer tries to get too artistic with it. I could tell this was legit. I loved it.

Email me with any of your other stories yeah? I'm hooked on the 'saga' now lol.

angels_avenged7x@yahoo.com :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

Great story, Only wished you were allowed to do her also. Maybe you have. If so tell us. She sounds hot

Allen51566Allen51566over 13 years ago
NIce writing

Enjoyed this one, specially being a fan of getting handjobs. Having her topless only was a nice addition.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Reminds me of the time I got my 1st cousin pregnant.

MickyDNYMickyDNY4 months ago

Good work! I’m looking forward to more from these siblings!

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