by coloradosouthernboy
im disappointed that it didn't end with them having sex. i want to hear more.
Sounds pretty good so far,hope you post the rest of the story soon!
This is pretty hot and I can understand why the extra taboo might be so exciting. Thanks for sharing.
Would love to read more of your adventures...true stories are the best! Nice job with the writing too!
This one could have been much more erotic. Somehow in reading it I felt that not all thepossible story was told.
I liked your story very much, it hits especially close to home for me.
The only thing I might have suggested is that you attempt to provide more detail for the reader so the mental imagery is made clearer, stronger. But overall, I enjoyed reading it and I hope to have the opportunity to read more.
Happy
Having been an only child I can only imagine how hot it would have been to catch my brother jerking off. I hope you write much more about them.
I live in Atlanta myself coloradosouthernboy,
since 78 so i hope to read more of your incredible and well written stories
Pat.
I can tell it's going to be very funny. I love funny so I'm going to rate this now and hope I agree with myself later.
I hate stories that the writer tries to get too artistic with it. I could tell this was legit. I loved it.
Email me with any of your other stories yeah? I'm hooked on the 'saga' now lol.
angels_avenged7x@yahoo.com :]
Great story, Only wished you were allowed to do her also. Maybe you have. If so tell us. She sounds hot
Enjoyed this one, specially being a fan of getting handjobs. Having her topless only was a nice addition.