All Comments on 'Sofi, Bottom Boi Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good Read ! Thanks DoxyTrainer !

The protagonist shows a lot of kindness and intuition . Sofi is very determined and also reads the guy well ! I would enjoy seeing more chapters . However this is one of those stories the readers can imagine the next day for themselves .

Jb423Jb423almost 6 years ago

Please let there be a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot

Hot and fucked up in all the right and wrong reasons would love a part two

GwylldGwylldalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

Love the concept from start to finish. Wonderful descriptive writing too.

DoxyTrainerDoxyTraineralmost 6 years agoAuthor
Part 2

I'm working on part two. This story is coming out pretty easily. Thank you for the encouragement since this is not what I normally write about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not What I Expected, But...

From the beginning Sofia grabbed my attention and held it throughtout. She's an amazingly flawed character you can't ignore. She's wonderful, and I want to read everything you've got with her in it. The writing is top notch and deserves the HOT flag that got me to want to read it. The anal sex is vivid and arousing. Well done.

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 5 years ago
Bravo

A story this ostensibly fucked up has no right to be this romantic. Well done! <3

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 5 years ago
Love this story,

And I love Sofia, What a sweet heart.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This pushes all my buttons

For years I've fantasized about some flat chested tiny-assed skinny little spinner who longed to be a twink boi and take it up the ass exclusively. I like men sexually but I could never connect on any other level. I need a female for that kind of bond, but I never connected with what I lusted after. This story is so well written it almost seems more like a memoir than a work of fiction, your characters fleshed out with humanity. I'm sure I'll be returning to this from time to time.+

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Excellent!

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