All Comments on 'Sofia'

I loved the build up...elaborate and yet not belaboured. Very hot. Probably the best I have come across for a while. Do dish up more

HOT HOT story. Love the innocence of Sofia but can feel the desires bubbling away inside her. More please!

One of the hottest stories I have ever read ! I came reading it. Roll on Chapter 2.

Love the seduction and submission. Very sexy.

More, please.

model going to low class phototogs and getting into the porn industry. Even without the drugs, power and greed, are often all that is needed to make them forget, their lives, their marriages, their husbands, and themselves. It was a hot story, I simply do not like rape stories. When you drug or get a girl drunk you are in effect raping them. Personally never needed that to seduce women. In this story you send a whore back to her husband probably impregnated with either an assholes or a mixed race baby. So much for her career as a model or a teacher.

I was as disappointed as Sofia when he did not cum inside her. Please do that NOW.

Congratulations! I imagine you have "whet" the ids of many with this storyline. Please continue to slake our thirst with additional tales of Sophia. I can hardly wait to "drink in" chapter two.

Congratulations! I imagine you have "whet" the ids of many with this storyline. Please continue to slake our thirst with additional tales of Sophia. I can hardly wait to "drink in" chapter two.

writing, really hot. liked it very much and it would be nice to see the development of the shooting and her coming back for more on her own will and NOT pregnant. that would be a turn off as much as blackmail.

Can't wait for ensuing chapters? Hopefully they'll contain a non-consensual theme. Not blackmail but not sudden uncontrolled nymphomania either. Perhaps situations where she is doped or duped into these sexuations. Thanks for the story.

Like all your stuff but this is great. You should do shorter stories more often. But definitely scope for more chapters, so yes , what are you waiting for?

Congratulations and thanks for writing the most exciting erotic story I've read this year. I noticed your comment regarding future chapters has been removed. Any chance your fans will be reading more of Sophie's dalliances.

Any chance Ms. Sophia will finish her photoshoot and or have additional reluctant affairs? Enjoyed your other stories and this one has the same erotic potential. Thanks.

Sophia has just nipped at the forbidden fruit. When will she

bite or be bitten by it? Hopefully soon. Thanks for the erotic story.

Okay, okay, obviously it's too cliche and corny to say this story left your readers feeling like there was only one chip in the bag but there it is. Any chance for additional chapters? I know others would also appreciate another chapter or two. Please consider leaving a reply on this matter in your bio or the comments section of this. Thanks for your consideration and contributions.

Unfortunately, I'm locked out of my 'account' and haven't been able to get a response from the site. So I've set up again as hal_tee. The answer to another chapter is that I want Sofia (and this storyline) to continue in a separate novel. It'll be called The Business and will appear later this year under my new hal_tee account. Thanks for reading!

Please Please Write a Follow up to this extremely hot story!!!

Second!

There's no second part because this story, even the names, were stolen from another site. Few details changed.

Please Follow up to this incredibly hot story!!!

Can't wait for further chapters? Hopefully a non-consensual theme. Not blackmail or sudden submission but perhaps situations where she has to surrender to her drug enhanced sex-drive?

Loved it

Crime this had no sequel. Seriously.