All Comments on 'Soft Submission Ch. 01: Captured'

Nice start to what sounds like a fun story will be waiting for the next episode....

I love it - I hope to read more about Sophie's capture

Adorable, sensual, and well-written!

I am sure that I have read this story before but under a different author? the premise of the story is just that familiar to me. or maybe this is just a re submit of an old story

Couldn't quite get my head round how, if Sophie is tied up (however gently):

- she could know that her blindfold was a pretty material, even though she couldn't see it

- she could be turned over while bound (unless her wrists are just tied together, rather than tenderly tied to the bedposts or something).

An interesting beginning. Hope it doesn't get brutal and porny.

I loved this story, well written. And an exciting start to poor Sophie's adventures with Miss Michelle.

I look forward to Sophie's passion filled submission - hopefully!

xoxo,

tedi

I certainly hope that this author is not just a one and off. I thought the story was really sweet but needs more chapters, in my opinion.

5/5

J

Sensual & Loving!

Definitely 5*-Stars

What a cute story!

Delightful, I'm definitely interested in what else this author has written!

[Bonus pts for safe words!]

Real turn on

Love dommes that see their subs as equal participants in the play. Firm boundaries combined with a desire to maximize pleasure for both sides.

Sadists don’t interest me. They get off on the power exchange rather than the person. Power is the ultimate human narcotic. The more you have the more you want and the more is required to sate the power hungry.

Great writing. Thank you for sharing.

Too bad the "I'm going to torture the orgasms out of you, nice and slowly." part never materialized though.