All Comments on 'Solo Trip - Day 01'

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MigbirdMigbird5 months ago

Storyline has real potential and the self-love pretty well done though not terribly erotic. I would think by the time the narrator settled into Airbnb we would know a bit more about her troubles/what brings tears. Going to like Alice, but not enough connection to justify gifts. Hey, get it, your fantasy piece; just some holes that interrupt flow. Am looking forward to where you go with this.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I really enjoyed this! Hoping it continues, I would definitely be interested to see where you take this. I'll be watching. Thank you for your stories!

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulster5 months ago

I truly enjoyed this first chapter. There’s a nice build, and several different stories to be told. I cannot wait to see what Alice brings next. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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