All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 13'

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Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Keep it going, I really am enjoying the story. AAAA++++

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430almost 3 years ago

Glad you decided to continue this story. It’s a good one. Thanks.

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 3 years ago
nice

where can i get some of that elixer?? please continue.

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 3 years ago
Good read

Glad you are continuing this story. Please do continue.

JohnSimmsJohnSimmsalmost 3 years ago

Really enjoying this story as new twists and character refinements are brought in. Very fun read. Thanks Doc. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Ariana's love for Alex being explored as well as all the children that are due to arrive!

Tonyusmc3051Tonyusmc3051over 2 years ago

I was really enjoying the story until you allowed cletus to "kiss his cock?" I was done after that. I didn't finish what I thought was an amazing story ruined by today's standard of acceptance for everyone. You need to add "gay" to your tags. Sorry Doc, you lost me. Take care.

01Timber6701Timber67about 1 year ago

This was a 2⭐️ chapter for me,, Cletus kissed his cock ,,, the marriage between the two girls and left Alex on the sidelines while he was getting water,,,, mom and Alex on the cruise was short and interrupted by the sister coming in ,,, it feels like mom is being pushed out of the story away from Alex ,,, and when the first born son comes of age it will be over between them,, this has been slowly going downhill since Ally was brought in to the mama’s

bigurnbigurn6 months ago

Wow again ... they sure don't need his ass anymore. 2 stars. All the family needs him for now, is the occasional breeding.

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