by DocWords
Not to nit pick but your doing a Greek inspired story. Hercules is the Roman name for the Greek hero, Heracles is the Greek name for the hero. Both names refer to the same hero, but one is the original Greek name and the other is the later Romanised name. But other then that great story, keep up the good work.
That's the best one so far! Laughed all the way. Alex has learned to just roll with with what is happening to him. Looking forward to more in this series.
This continues to be a 'riveting', if somewhat unconventional novella...
You are turning Alex into a brawny bruiser...with some issues that are caused by his size/appearance/whatever...please remember he is an 18-year-old KID...
Even though there are already chapters written to the end...I am hoping you DO RIGHT by this whole thing...back to comment at end of previous chapter-I WILL quit the story at the first sign of things that are too over-the-hill...
Still, **5** stars, right now...
DocWords, you have a great imagination and an easy to read writing style.
I really enjoy this story!
Absolutely 5 stars. Great story, great background story for all the out of the ordinary situations.
Whoooo boy...need more stars!
Sure, some editing issues across the chapters so far (probably typos more than anything). But damn. nothing detracted from the solid and interesting plot line. :Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this story up for a satisfactory conclusion.