All Comments on 'Solstice Ch. 14'

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Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

The stories are great. Keep them going. AAAAA+++++

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Nice segment I enjoyed it.

Cheers

SAGE

laughdruidlaughdruidalmost 3 years ago

Loved it, more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Different, kind of refreshing

UncletoddUncletoddalmost 3 years ago

You do have a way with words always enjoy and always a fan

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 3 years ago

Still having fun reading this...5*

Cutty4637Cutty4637almost 3 years ago

This has been a great read. Please keep going.

MvitalMvitalalmost 3 years ago

Not to nit pick but your doing a Greek inspired story. Hercules is the Roman name for the Greek hero, Heracles is the Greek name for the hero. Both names refer to the same hero, but one is the original Greek name and the other is the later Romanised name. But other then that great story, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

5 Stars ! Keep it going, I love it.

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430almost 3 years ago

I love fantasy. Thanks.

FoggyKernelFoggyKernelover 2 years ago

That's the best one so far! Laughed all the way. Alex has learned to just roll with with what is happening to him. Looking forward to more in this series.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

This continues to be a 'riveting', if somewhat unconventional novella...

You are turning Alex into a brawny bruiser...with some issues that are caused by his size/appearance/whatever...please remember he is an 18-year-old KID...

Even though there are already chapters written to the end...I am hoping you DO RIGHT by this whole thing...back to comment at end of previous chapter-I WILL quit the story at the first sign of things that are too over-the-hill...

Still, **5** stars, right now...

dawg997dawg997over 1 year ago

DocWords, you have a great imagination and an easy to read writing style.

I really enjoy this story!

MyrrdinCCRMyrrdinCCRover 1 year ago

Absolutely 5 stars. Great story, great background story for all the out of the ordinary situations.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 1 year ago

So f-ing hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Whoooo boy...need more stars!

Sure, some editing issues across the chapters so far (probably typos more than anything). But damn. nothing detracted from the solid and interesting plot line. :Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this story up for a satisfactory conclusion.

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