by DocWords
once again the best just don't end it to fast, I know i said hurry up and you did a great job!!!
LMAO that boys life is going to be fun for a while. Good stuff m8 keep it up.
Lot of repetitive story segments anymore - need to stir/speed things up or something. Still 5* but slipping...LOL
This is the best series that I've read, and it just keeps getting better.
i hope this story continues for a long time. its great. i would even like to read about the next generations.
You've got a great story and have built a good world with it, but it seems like you're rushing the ending here as spell check failed you at least once "walked in pears".
Love this story!! Thank you for continuing it. I canโt wait to see the next installment