All Comments on 'Soma Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Odd but fun

The premise is quirky...like the long standing nightmare of being naked and not being able to find a bathroom!! But your writing is good and editing almost without error. Waiting for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fantastic

I always love Wonderstorm's work and this is no exception.

SeracaeSeracaeover 16 years ago
Fantastic writing

You've taken a bizarre premise, and made it work fantastically. It somehow manages to keep the realistic reaction to the odd situation intact, which makes the ridiculous still seem arousing. I'm quite impressed, and very much looking forward to the next segment!

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