All Comments on 'Some Girls Never Learn Ch. 01'

REALLY well written. Very realistic. Looking forward to further chapters.

I really love this story, you have an actual plot! It's not just about the sex, although I must say, the sex was very good. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to the next chapter.

I truly enjoyed this story. Your competence as a writer shines through. I have a picture painted in my head of Emma and Noah and where they are. I really like someone that can write with substance. Great sex too! I look forward to you next chapter!

The writing was absolutely lovely. I'm very impressed. I'm looking forward to chapter two.

I'm so sad this is your only story up! I want more!

I had a smile on my face at your 80s feminist bookstore. I was at uni then and most of the most vocal feminists I knew then are now suburban mothers. I think one of them may realise the irony. Thanks for taking me back momentarily. -- UK CYNIC