All Comments on 'Some of That Old Time Religion'

Thanks - a good read

Nice story.... apart from UK is "Old Blighty" - Blimey is a mild expletive

"Old Blimey" "Crystal Palace district, South London to be exact"? It's a bit crappy when people try to use words and phrases they've no idea about. "Old Blighty" is the correct form, and as Crystal Palace is more exact than South London. I'm sure your Dad would be spinning in his grave.

Apart from that, pretty hot stuff.

Great story! Literate and original. Nice work.

The premise of sex as a mechanism for discharging and de-fusing the forces of evil and converting them to good struck me as quite inventive and intriguing. The use of an odd rural dialect to drive the story somehow was not as annoying and distracting as it usually seems when thrown in as a cliche to add flavor. Usually the dialect device feels clumsily stuck on to the detriment of the story. In this case it seemed to me the perfect vehicle for the explication of the clever philosophy which imbues the male fantasy of sex-on-demand with an air of holiness rather than mere perversion. Thanks!

Fantastic story. Woman in the story has just the right amount of control over her lust-drunk young visitor. Love the way she tells him its alright to cum in her. She is comforting, nurturing, accepting and understanding. Fantastic. Please write more. You're a fantastic writer. What ever mistakes you've made are minor and insignificant. Ignore these other who quibble over small details.