All Comments on 'Some Things Never Change'

Good start to the tale.

Some people never learn!

5

She just wants some strange dick, only the dick she has now does not share.

Seems like she's into marrying hard guys, then risking everything. Dangerous. D

Damn - Great short one...right up there with some of HDK's ! 5*

Yes! 5***** all the way! I loved it. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Very well written short story.

Excellent short but sweet vignette

An excellent short story that begs for a longer full tale.

Well done.

Short and Sweet..........

Yup, good one...

Great little flash story.

If the bar was packed as the author maintains, where did the empty table come from?

Oh! And how do you stoke someone’s hair and face?

Fifteen years? Let her go, not your problem anymore...

Good, but needs an ending. What happened next?

Well done.

Ed

It’s never too late to get even. 5*

I can only imagine how good it would feel to get that kind of revenge. Loved it.

15 años de obsesión?

wow! que buen protagonista tenemos aquí jajajaja

Shirt but well told. That kind of revenge with that much patience really was well told in such a short story. Loved it.

Excellent, short and sweet for long-term revenge.

This was delicious !

I'm not sure I got the whole story....

Tony who?!

A great highlight of a cheating life. Good job.

Sad how people don't get it. It is just a story right.

Pretty good as far as it went, but now we need Tony's story.

😁

Another story where you find yourself saying, "come on, it was just getting good." Would have loved to hear the background and what Tony did.

Sometimes it's the short and simple that does it. Great job.

Short and to the point. Yep, “Run”. 4*.

Outstanding!!!

“ My god, did you thank Tony?” Someone should thank Tony…for this interesting story.

Short & sweet, but a bit too short for my tastes. I felt some background info would be good. The only thing surprising me was that it wasn't his wife but his friend's. Otherwise, while sweet, it became predictable. 3 stars Bob

Excellent!

Great story that seems to say once a cheater, always a cheater. Hope Tony catches up with her and the wormy little asshole too. Was he hired by Tony to bird dog her?

nobody likes a tattler...especially if physical violence is a result.

When I was in high school in 1979 some dude narc'ed to school security on me for having some joints and a small bottle of Southern Comfort. i wasn't dealing them. I had just gotten the best deal ever, 8 joints for 5 dollars. I'm heading to my first period class and, bam, i forget how it went down. in the end, they were checking every single pocket of my Army surplus trench coat and finding both my left over SoCo and the joints.

Now, in this story I could kinda see why he might narc on the woman, but, really, it's none of his business. What he did was petty, just like what Paul did to me those decades ago. You know she's promiscuous, doesn't everyone? Why be the one to throw the wrench into other people's lives that you aren't prepared to 'fix'?

The characters in these stories STAY invested in shit that ain't real.

Why did he do that?

Every other sentence beginning with I + verb creates this monotonous rhythm. Even those who don't notice it overtly sense there's something off with the story. If you doubt me, use that old editor's trick of reading it aloud; the ears hear differently than the inner dialogue inside your brain. English lends itself to saying something umpteen different ways, such as by compounding sentences, separating independent clauses with a semi-colon, using the em dash, and even commas. This is simply awful writing.

Let the 'What happened next?' brigade moan at you for a change. They'll find me again soon. Good story. Great ending! 5*.

Tony is one bad guy, mob or something else. If she knows that what is she doing commuting suicide.?

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Why is he obsessed with a slut from his past? The story makes him seem like a guy with no life in the present other than ruminating over her betrayal. She's another man's problem now. The MC should have moved on long ago.

Imagine letting someone live rent free in your mind for 15 years, what a super cuck ... wonder if he got a cape with that.

Well that was about as good a short as I've ever read.

Lovely wicked. Zhis iz my favorite styla. Five and cheers.

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Loved it!!

Perfect! Great little tale - Bravo!

Well done. Need more of these female dogs running around loose to be held accountable - to infinity and beyond. Not just retribution, but needed to clean up the culture - and necessary for a measure of justice, especially on repeat offenders.

No justice, no peace.

The bitch is over due for what is coming cheaters should pay a higher price than just a divorce maybe the Muslims in the Middle East have the right attitude towards adulters.

15yrs was too long....revenge should have happened sooner

That was a fun read. Well written and enjoyable. That's!

No justice no peace? Wow commentors are nuts here!

Nice set up, short but so to the point.

fun read

great story some sluts cheat on the wrong man

Loved it. Nuff said

Good for him. Letting To y clean up and rubbing his face in it all in one stop….

Good writing plus a twist! I like this one!