All Comments on 'Someone Sweet For Me'

Sweet but a bit quick and lacking bite.

she would have been honest with herself & John and left him before screwing Tim.

As it is, all she did was to lower herself to John's level. And that is pretty low!

according to this author, Marianne's affair was okay, but her hubby's wasn't. Ha! Typical PC feminist hypocrisy!

This was a story that clearly tops all stories on this site in those fantasies that we often are searching for. Maryanne definitely had the hots for someone to treat her right and Tim was that someone one. I loved it and its ending. Please write more like this.

Don, Social Scientist and Paralegal

You have a cheating slut calling her husband an asshole. John got what he deserved and the slut should have divorced him before she fucked Tim. Now how long before she cheats on Tim? She cheated with Tim so it's only natural that the slut will cheat on him.

There's nothing wrong with what you wrote. But I just happen to be one who likes the forbidden affair, even a little secrect decept perhaps. The type story I like would have had her stay married and make her hubbie think the baby is his.

As I said to start. Nothing wrong with this type either, but my personal preference is the other type story.

the last commment was made by a bitch, make the husband think the baby is his, is that what your wife did. The whore in this story shouled be taken out and put to sleep like the "bitch" she is..

There are so many adults willing out there why would an adult molest a child. John deserves death, not prison. Does not excuse his wife for cheating but at least her guy was an adult.

Life is fucked up sometimes.

I know this is an older posting,,but,,,,if you ever write again,,get an editor,make it longer and dont beat around the bush so much,,,lol,get right to the point,,in less than 5 minutes,,,,wow,,,fastest whole life story i have ever read,not including your other one,,that is almost the same thing,just different names,,,,

Really, really silly, preschool style story. Why would anyone think this for to publish.