All Comments on 'Someone's Coming'

Pynchon beginning was promising, emotions then running, Pynchonesque, all over the place, The stream of consciousness almost succeeds, a little more confidence, control exerted, and you have an excellent tale.

It's a layered gloss, not intended to be Pynchonesque. No one can be, really. He's beyond pastiche.

Thanks for your kind words, though. Encouraging.