All Comments on 'Something in the Air'

A little different - but an interesting premise. Pretty well executed. A little "stream of conciousness" technique, but used sparingly enough to be effective without being unduly confusing. Try something else - maybe a sequel would be interesting to see how far you can spin the story line and expand it.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!

Wow, this is very nice. I hope we get more, I'm looking forward to it.

If ever a story needed a sequel, this is it. Lots of great directions this story could go...

I want the rest of the story, the sooner the better! Though my arms are getting tired as it is...

Good imagination! The lead-in premise is very weak.

If you hadn't described "Jill" in such good detail, I'd have written this off. However, the 'howling' was worth it. And.... now Jill is going bi-sexual????