All Comments on 'Something New'

he: q>".....I always wanted to lose my anal virginity to some one whom I trust and love and know will treat me gently when doing so."<q

she: q>"Ok, honey, I am going to make you my bitch now."<q

this is the woman who he loses the virginity to, the woman he trusts so much? and then in the same encounter, she invites 3 other people into it, a les and 3 gays? no previous discussion of this? no rubbers either!

you write your character wanted love and trust and gentleness, but then you turn right around and violate pretty much everything.

This was hot!

Loved your story, my fantasy...

"you write your character wanted love and trust and gentleness, but then you turn right around and violate pretty much everything."

YEah, Jay already lost his anal virginity to her and they trust eachother's judgement...sheesh, you are on a website with erotic fiction of all kinds and the fact that there are multiple partners is what bothers you?

There was no violation at all, the guys treated him right.

if anyone wants to do this to me i would really love having two or more cocks.