All Comments on 'Something Within Me: Halloween Story'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

Pretty clever and original, short and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

A very interesting story, I especially liked the ending where Philip was revealed as being the gypsy. I think the story could easily be expanded into multiple parts, especially if you looked at his past lives etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Holy Shit!

I looked all those things up. They don’t mean exactly what you say, but it could be. You tell it like you have seen it. Are sure this is fiction? It would make one hell of a movie.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...