by BANJAR
Well crafted, and eminently believable - that puts it right up there ('scuse the pun) with the best written erotic stories.
Proof that great erotica can be more than just hot sex.
Nicely built up, and no need to suspend disbelief.
I really enjoyed the way this story flowed. It is totally believable,and refreashing.
They were made of zinc-coated steel. Hold a magnet to one and you'll see it's steel. Aluminum was being used for aircraft production, it was a valuable commodity that wouldn't/couldn't have been used for pennies.
You made these needful people breathe in a very ordinary but special way.
You possess a touch - an insight plus the ability to express it not often found here.
This effort shows that there are some very talented people here on occasion who don't need the tawdry props others require to arouse and entertain.
Thanks Author
With High Regard
As mentioned...so real and believable...........sounded like an actual event...............
Believable, warm and touching...
Not to speak of tightly written!
Thank you for such a deliteful treat. Unlike many men, I enjoy a little romanticism now and then. Your account of two strangers spending such a wonderfully tender and loving night was wonderful. I hope this was only one of many stories you have written. I'll be checking right away.
A great story. A story that I, as one of many people lost in the shuffle of life can relate to. Credit you as the writer for so skillfully being able to put it down on paper.
I am so glad that I finally found this little gem. What wonderful character development.
5 Plus !!!
Thank you.
Good story enjoyed
The 1943 pennies were made out of steel. They would rust if left in water. ZKi