All Comments on 'Somewhere In Between'

by BANJAR

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Classy

Well crafted, and eminently believable - that puts it right up there ('scuse the pun) with the best written erotic stories.

Pirate TregarePirate Tregareover 17 years ago
Great job.

Proof that great erotica can be more than just hot sex.

Nicely built up, and no need to suspend disbelief.

tshedstshedsover 17 years ago
Very Nice

I really enjoyed the way this story flowed. It is totally believable,and refreashing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Actually, 1943 pennies were NOT made of aluminum

They were made of zinc-coated steel. Hold a magnet to one and you'll see it's steel. Aluminum was being used for aircraft production, it was a valuable commodity that wouldn't/couldn't have been used for pennies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
How Human - How Believable - How Well Written

You made these needful people breathe in a very ordinary but special way.

You possess a touch - an insight plus the ability to express it not often found here.

This effort shows that there are some very talented people here on occasion who don't need the tawdry props others require to arouse and entertain.

Thanks Author

With High Regard

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Kudos

As mentioned...so real and believable...........sounded like an actual event...............

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Excellent...

Believable, warm and touching...

Not to speak of tightly written!

Lucky MannLucky Mannover 16 years ago
A deliteful treat

Thank you for such a deliteful treat. Unlike many men, I enjoy a little romanticism now and then. Your account of two strangers spending such a wonderfully tender and loving night was wonderful. I hope this was only one of many stories you have written. I'll be checking right away.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

A great story. A story that I, as one of many people lost in the shuffle of life can relate to. Credit you as the writer for so skillfully being able to put it down on paper.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffalmost 6 years ago
This Story was written in 2007

I am so glad that I finally found this little gem. What wonderful character development.

5 Plus !!!

Thank you.

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Parted the forest loved the hair but maybe different term definitely keep hair

Good story enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Pennies

The 1943 pennies were made out of steel. They would rust if left in water. ZKi

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