All Comments on 'Son of a Beach Ch. 01'

Wow that was some crazy stuff. But we are hooked can't wait to see what's next keep up the great work

Damn great build up !

I can't wait to read chapter 2

Wooow ... what a great story and build up ... please go on and let us read more chapters ....

Fucking awesome! Loved the buildup!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Five stars and a favorite point!

Good story. The sex was hot and I especially liked the pee scene. I also enjoyed the long tease of the witless brother and the comical scene with the “sun screen”

What was missing, however, was the dose of realism that makes incest stories hotter. Did sis and her bf fool around with her parents regularly? I would have liked more background on the sexual history of mom and sis to understand abetted what led up to them fucking Luke.

Page 4 wasn't needed.

enjoyed this story and looking forward to the next chapter, thank you!

Very nice! Good build up. Nice twist to the story. Looking forward to more sexy time at the beach house.

Lucky Lukey.

Way too much build up. 4 pages and all it was was touchy, feely. And that wasn't until the bottom of page 3.

I'm really getting tired of all the 'wussy guy' stories.

Outstanding! But someone, hit that boy up beside the head and wake him up..........():\

I prefered the buildup of Life's a Beach to this one. The sex was good though 👍

I also prefer 30 + / middle aged guys with mom's in their 60s, but that is not a comment on quality.

Good luck in your writing.