by freedomofnoise
Glad you came back and continued I look forward to where this story is going.
Another great chapter!! But maybe next time a little less wait for chapter 3
I was so glad when I saw a new chapter of this. I'm cheering on Max all the way through.
I am so happy that you came back and I had almost given up hope that there would be another chapter, but thankfully you proved me wrong, now keep doing that and post chapter three, I am so intrigued by Mars and Max and this world you are writing about is quite interesting I really cannot wait to read more, Please don not keep us hanging for too long
This is one of the stories that simply captivates me. Very lovely written!
I cant get enough of this :)
I wish this was a longer chapter.
Superb storytelling.
I'm utterly confused by the stuff Tina is saying to him. I'm really intrigued with the story. I found it for the first time today and hope the wait isn't as long for the next chapter as it was apparently for this one. I really want more! For a first story, it is really great. I love the details you give that creates pictures in the reader's mind. It seems to be a really imaginative world you've created and I really look forward to more.
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Enchanting and unique. Too good for the likes of us. Get thee to a publisher, man.
You have got me hooked and sweet Tina helping him to believe he is more I can't wait to see what will become of Mars and Max
Wow! Plz finish this story... I beg you! Plz! If u get this out in paper back... I'll totally buy it.. No doubt
I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEE
THIS IS LIKE A DRUG
GIVE ME MORE NOWWWWWWWWW ♥
LOVE IT!!!!!!
I almost forgot about this story, I had to read the first chapter to remind me and am so thankfull I did .please write longer chapters and sooner.
Oh my gosh I saw this and was like I remember reading the first chapter of this. I love this story its so fascinating. I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
I LOVE this story!! please please PLEASE don't make us wait for chapter 3!
I absolutely love this! I don't encounter such characters in stories usually and let me tell you, it feels so refreshing! Not to mention your descriptions blow everything away. I hope it gets updated soon, because now I'm helplessly in love with this piece.