All Comments on 'Son of the Time God Ch. 01'

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TommyCrazyGuNTommyCrazyGuN2 months ago

Great story would love to see future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Love it, time for an impregnation spree.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Part 2 please.

dvmrdvmr2 months ago

Great start to a great series! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Liked the story but it was a little weird continue to see where this goes 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please let him knock up Mel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story. Definitely keep going with the themes of revenge and him feeling conflicted by his lust.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Cool I likey, please do continue, you get 5 stars😎

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Interesting story. Would love to see where it goes. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Didnt like where he sent her vedio to her contacts including dad....

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Would like to see more chapters to this story. I got a little confused in parts that could use polishing but all in all definitely a great story. Please keep it up.

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