All Comments on 'Son of the Time God Ch. 01'

Note from the author: I've been really busy lately, but more chapters will be coming soon! Thank you for your feedback and your patience

More chapters please!

cool start, nice to see actually evil/ruthless mc in story like that

Hope he takes his mom on a nice long time-stop and doesn't go easy on her in future chapters

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Would like to see more chapters to this story. I got a little confused in parts that could use polishing but all in all definitely a great story. Please keep it up.

Didnt like where he sent her vedio to her contacts including dad....

Interesting story. Would love to see where it goes. :)

Cool I likey, please do continue, you get 5 stars😎

Great story. Definitely keep going with the themes of revenge and him feeling conflicted by his lust.

Please let him knock up Mel

Liked the story but it was a little weird continue to see where this goes 4 stars

Great start to a great series! Thank you.

Part 2 please.

Love it, time for an impregnation spree.

Great story would love to see future chapters.