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Click hereIn the morning all I needed was a couple cups of coffee, and toast. I was too nervous to eat. Sam had OJ, a bagel with smear, and fruit salad. We got our debarkation number, and the bags had already been picked up, as we wandered the ship waiting for our section to be announced to go ashore. We were going by the purser's office when Samuel stopped to read a poster. He turned to me, with a glint in his eye, and a huge smile.
"Becky," for the first time I could ever remember, Sammy called me by my name, instead of by mother, or mom, or mama, or mommy; "Rebecca, would you like to sign up for an 'anniversary' cruise for next year? The first twenty couples get a ten percent discount on first class tickets."
I looked at my son's smiling face, so different from when he had come aboard ship. I looked at my Sammy's crotch; it was tenting in anticipation even now! There was only one right and appropriate answer I could give, though to the world it might seem improper and inappropriate. But then, nobody knew what was between the two of us - nu? I looked at Samuel, and smiled back. "Ahoy Vey! Would I!!"
- COMMENTS
linnearover 4 years agoYou have an amazing gift of storytelling, the dialogue was fantastic and so funny. I wish I could have given you more stars.
Kitist02over 7 years agoThe dialogue was a lot of fun to read and the puns and double entendre's had me in stitches. It was a great culture romp and I applaud your for your handling of the idiom and sensuosity of the situation. The build-up was almost painful to feel.
The only flaw I could complain about was that he had not been given the definition of character to be a real person. But then again, she was enough character for both of them, just like many women of the strain.
All in all, it was a cheerfully debauched read and I enjoyed it a bunch. Thanks for writing it.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoGive me a moment, Talk amongst yourselves. I'll give you a topic. The Oedipal Complex. Is it really complex? Discuss! Oy, I'm better now. Whew! Love the story!
