All Comments on 'Son's Rise Ch. 05'

How do you plan on finishing this story?

I have a few suggestions:

1.Have son become more dominate with the mother,as that appears to be her fetish.

2.Become closer to Joan,his friends mother,leaving her to ponder what she has done to her family.

3.Have Joan throw Derek out of the house and becoming Josh's permanent lover and/or soul mate.

4.Have Joan and Josh conspire together to get retribution from Derek and Donna for caring pact between the two mothers to the point that caused the death of Josh's father.

Donna didn't show any remorse when caught by her husband. Upon hearing that she was to get a new car,she basically couldn't have cared less that she was destroying her family;her only concern was herself and her pleasures with Derek and his other friends with what they could do for her.

Joan is a more caring person who probably have more feelings for Josh than his mother does,so they should have a serious relationship despite the age difference.

ok, you were doing great, a little weird of a ending for the father but it works I

guess. But you need to wrap it up with a good ending. Now that its just the mothers and sons.

Please continue this series. I really loved it. Please have a chapter where Darek takes Donna to a barber shop where she gets her pussy shaved on a barber chair, followed by a cropped haircut.

I beg you to continue this wonderful series

a disgusting end!

a waste of time!

I agree story fell apart at chapter 4.

Chapter 4 was bad enough but to end it with something like chapter 5 really put the screws to the whole story. That doesn't even count the number of times you mixed up the mothers names in the previous chapters. Too bad. It could have been a decent story.

Story went south at the gangbang.

Way south.

Should have been labeled as such.