All Comments on 'Sophia'

First story!

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Wrong category this is a lesbian story. And the "wife" is just another cheating skank. The "husband" is not really mentioned. If you are going to write a lesbian story put it in the right category.

Very well written. Nice sexual tension. 5 stars.

WTF was this doing in Loving Wives?

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1 *

Well selfish people do vile and disgusting things

Very enticing but ended too soon

A tantalisingly good beginning

Equally disappointing and unexciting.

More loving lesbians.

This is a very well conceived and executed story which by the author's inadvertence fell into the cesspool of BTBers

As to the irrelevant comment that this is a first story: it is a better story qua story and better written to boot than the average 4.50 piece on this list

Two beautiful bodies must come together. (If only for getting some order into this mess.)

Poorly written and wrong category. Not a good start...

Alice .... one question .... when you order out do they deliver your husband's meals to the bedroom closet? Just asking ....

Very well written with nice character development. As yet just an introduction and lead up to what could be an interesting and erotic tale. Of course that's if there is another part? Unfortunately the author failed to indicate whether this the first part or the whole thing? Also, I suggest putting any further parts in the lesbian category, the story will be much better received there, unless of course the plot develops in a different way than what's indicated here.

I for one will be looking forward to more, if there is more to come?

Difficult to score as it doesn’t really make a lot of sense. Is this a minor aberration on her part, or the start of an affair?

I’m really ebjoying this! Super seductive and sexy! I hope that there is a next chapter to it! And maybe a little more emotion surrounding her marriage? (Not insisting, more of a request for one of the elements I tend to enjoy in these stories.) Thank you for posting it!

And please ignore the raging men with emotional IQs of toddlers, it’s in the right place and it’s well written!

Well done, describing how vile and disgusting a selfish woman can be

Lesbians that hate the patriarchy. Nothing new to read here. Just more rainbow propaganda.

Why do the women haters and incels even bother to come here if they hate it so much?

Intriguing—with strong hints of a rapidly developing eroticism.

Do not usually like these English soap operas, but this was well written. Not enamored of the lesbian angle but we shall see how far Sophia progresses down the line.

Bravo! This is terrifically sexy. Looking forward to reading the next instalments

The Sophia stories are now being published in Erotic Couplings.

I came after reading pt 11 in the other forum and really enjoy your style and humour.

Reading some of the comments here, I think you’re well out of this snake pit.

This story is super sexy!

Wow! So sensuous. I was in a right old state!