All Comments on 'Sophia Pt. 04'

This writer definitely hates men and favours women. Now the cheating bitch is fucking all comers it doesn't matter what gender they are. Way to go writer you have written a story about one fucked up character. It doesn't care who it hurts and it definitely doesn't "love" anyone except itself.

Wow. That was erotic as hell!

The synopsis told me it wasn't worth reading. A young wife has a sexual awakening, translated, "a young wife becomes a cum dump slut". Just another same old, same old story that's been done a thousand times before, and better. I have a suggestion, find a new hobby.

This piece as well crafted as the last. Feels in some way like three parts: Showing Myska around/getting to know her and sharing that with us, the humorous “bucking bronco” sex with Peter, and the closing massage/love making with Myska. Again, the contrast between erotic scenes is striking. Glad you continue Sophia’s awakening that must include future bouts with Peter given your line: “For many years afterwards, they joked about his 'gangsta rap shit' that came from no one knew where.” Curious. In any case, always find it interesting, albeit unfortunate for the author, when some comments are little more than moralizing rants with nothing offered about writing style/quality, character development, dialogue, etc. Rants that reveal more about the state of the commentator than the story. Hope you continue to share in whatever category.

Excellent story….

very good, please write more.

Wow. This story is very, very erotic and sensual. I’ve enjoyed each chapter. Maybe because I, too, have felt these same urges.

It’s very clear from the comment from anon down below who didn’t read the story yet made a nasty comment because he knew what it was about from the synopsis, that he’s the stupid troll who posts all the hateful comments. His assumption that any wife that has a sexual awakening must devolve into a “cum dump slut” shows his complete ignorance and his preconceived ideas. My guess is they are based on a personal experience. It shows the stupidity of the poster and how little concern he has about being accurate, just so long as he can spew his hate.

It is so pleasant (and so unusual here) to read a well-crafted story, one with careful editing, that I can't believe I'm in Lit. Where has Alice_Nicol been hiding?